Talk:Konoha no Sekai Jijou/@comment-220.255.2.110-20121005170639

Corrections:

Line 11:sonna mizuiro no yumemiteta

Line 15: byoushin wa susumidasu no o yamete

Line 18: imi to yume to jitai o awasete

Line 24: kareru taiyou no oto museru entenka no me

Line 25: natsuBATEshita no seken ni hajikidasaretasareta youna

Last Line: ano me wa